Write Lean, Write Clean

Diane Helentjaris
3 min readMar 14, 2022

Free your prose of crutch words.

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“Blurby, blurby, blurby,” shouted C. Robert Constable, my high school English teacher. He stared in mock anger for a beat at the guilty student. His eyes magnified into huge googly-eyes by the thick lenses of his glasses. Then, with drama, he broke and cracked a smile. “Yogi,” as we called him in honor of his bear-like persona, was on a mission. Rumors were a-wing. Graduates from our rural…

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Diane Helentjaris

Writer with a love of the overlooked. Author of the historical fiction novel The Indenture of Ivy O’Neill,.www.DianeHelentjaris.com